GOOD Job, JV!
I don't see a banefit from heating the can, in fact I would avoid that. You want oil/ water liquid/vapor to condense in there and collect as liquid to be emptied as needed. If there's room and you wanted, you could drill/tap a hole offset in bottom to install a radiator drain cock as a drain. Just could be easier to service. But gotta remember the whole deal needs to be air/vacuum tight.
It isnt exposed to manifold vacuum, no worries there. If you can just suck on one nipple and it holds it's OK, or test w/ Mityvac if wanted to. Need to keep outside dirt/water from getting ingested in cleaned airflow going out.
Good job on design, the worn aluminum finish almost camo's in with rest of engine!
I'm not a welder, so I couldn't fabricate like you! I'm just a guy w/ store-bought tools and some Imagination...
Copper scrub pad inside is great idea that helps trap/condense vapor so it can fall off into bottom reservoir. Judging from it's size you ought not to have to empty it very often, I think. Next one you make you can incorporate lessons from this one!
Good on You, Buddy!
Tracy G