Here's an update on my implementation of this circuit:
Because I'm adding voltage (as most of us who live below ~3000' elevation above sea level probably will), I've had to add a resistor to the +5VDC leg of this circuit before it connects to the potentiometer. why? Well, when I tried to trim just that wee bit more lean, I'd get an engine code (I never bothered checking it but I'm sure it has something to do with the MAP sensor), and the EGR valve would slam wide open causing the engine to stall. as best I can reckon, I'm knocking the 5V down to around 1V, which is still plenty of offset to add to the MAP signal, and I may be using maybe 0.3V of that. I'm not especially savvy when it comes to electronics, but I can probably find the right things to measure and formulas to plug those numbers into to get the REAL answer.
It is possible to get VERY lean with this circuit, In other words. This may have (well, probably has) something to with the EFIE I have on my o2 sensor as well. I'm still tweaking, so mileage is off my benchmarks, but it looks like when I'm in the zone, I'm getting slightly better mileage than I do when it's summer, and that's including some warm-up time (yes, I know it's bad...) BUT I think it's a bit too lean, because the power feels to have dropped off, and that could be a danger. I can now idle smoothly below 500 rpm...somewhere between 450-475 as it appears on my tachometer, whereas before it was a rough, stumbly idle
This is weird to report: I may have taken things too far. now I need to back off some, and find the happy medium between drivability and efficiency.